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B+
82 / 100

Suggestion
Replace "big and important" with more specific language like "transformative and far-reaching"
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Good use of specific examples — factories and urbanization paint a vivid picture
Suggestion
Your thesis could be stronger. State your argument more directly in the first paragraph.
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